Monday, May 11, 2020

persuasive writing

      Stop entry into the West Coast.


I think putting roadblocks in is a good thing so it stops people that don’t live here coming
in because if they are sick they will spread the virus if they have it. I also think that only the people that deliver us what we need should be the only people that can pass the roadblocks. The roadblocks should be up till the virus has stopped spreading. The shops and schools could open if they did this too. We could all be safe on the West Coast.

2 comments:

  1. You have made some good points, Kaylee. It might be a good idea to keep people from visiting the West Coast.
    Can you talk to someone on the hangout about the formatting of your work on the blog? it is very hared to read on here as it is going off the page.

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.