The other day we went with my dad to the bush to get a little bit of fire wood. It was a nice day out in the bush, so quiet. Here's a photo of my dad, Maliah and I up on the side of a hill, we had to climb up there.
Hi Kaylee it is Michaela from Yaldhurst Model school It is a great blog that you got fire wood but we would what more detail of were you went? how did you got there? like in a car That looks like there is a lot of wood there, how much did you get? how long did it take for you to get all the fire wood kind regards Michaela
Hey Keylee i'm Delilah from Yaldhurst model school my class is Rimu. I love your blogpost it is really cool maybe you could add a bit more writing like how did you get there. But other than that it was really GREAT! I loved it have a great day.
Hi Kaylee! My name is Hana and I"m a year 6 from Yaldhurst Model School!
Wow Kaylee! I love this blog post! The photos look cool! And that hill is pretty big! It's quite steep, too! I like how the photo included where you put all the firewood.
I actually also gather firewood with my Dad too! We have 2 fireplaces. One for the bath, and one in the living room to keep us nice and toasty! Our place is quite easy to heat up, since we have a container house! No, not the plastic containers, the giant metal containers! One container is for the living room and kitchen, and the other container is for the bathroom and the bedrooms!
Next time, you could try to put in more photos, or put the photo in a DLO! And, if you want, you could even explain where that place is, or how you got there! But, that's just a thought!
HI Kaylee, I'm Renae From Yaldhurst Model School. This blog is cool! There is not a lot of writing in this blog, Maybe you could Tell us if it was fun and how much ''Fire Wood'' you got. I love the photos you have at the end of the blog. Maybe you could say Bye at the end of you posts and have a few Question . Besides that Great work. How was you Quarantine? From Renae
Kia Ora I am Olivia From Yaldhurst Model School this blog was a really cool blog it was quite interesting for me to read but next time I think that you should try and ad more writting or a slide show even a google drawing will do fine I just found it a quite small blog collecting the wood looked fun but your blog is great Why did you go collecting wood? Kind regards Olivia B
Hi Kaylee, (that's my sister name too). This is a great post!
ReplyDeleteNext time to make it better then you could add more writing about how long it took to find some wood and how long it took all together!
Bye for now - Ethan
Hi Kaylee it is Michaela from Yaldhurst Model school
ReplyDeleteIt is a great blog that you got fire wood but we would what more detail of were you went? how did you got there? like in a car
That looks like there is a lot of wood there, how much did you get?
how long did it take for you to get all the fire wood
kind regards
Michaela
Hey Keylee i'm Delilah from Yaldhurst model school my class is Rimu.
ReplyDeleteI love your blogpost it is really cool maybe you could add a bit more writing like how did you get there. But other than that it was really GREAT! I loved it have a great day.
From Delilah
Hi Kaylee! My name is Hana and I"m a year 6 from Yaldhurst Model School!
ReplyDeleteWow Kaylee! I love this blog post! The photos look cool! And that hill is pretty big! It's quite steep, too! I like how the photo included where you put all the firewood.
I actually also gather firewood with my Dad too! We have 2 fireplaces. One for the bath, and one in the living room to keep us nice and toasty! Our place is quite easy to heat up, since we have a container house! No, not the plastic containers, the giant metal containers! One container is for the living room and kitchen, and the other container is for the bathroom and the bedrooms!
Next time, you could try to put in more photos, or put the photo in a DLO! And, if you want, you could even explain where that place is, or how you got there! But, that's just a thought!
Keep up the amazing work Kaylee!
- Hana
HI Kaylee, I'm Renae From Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteThis blog is cool!
There is not a lot of writing in this blog, Maybe you could Tell us if it was fun and how much ''Fire Wood'' you got.
I love the photos you have at the end of the blog.
Maybe you could say Bye at the end of you posts and have a few Question .
Besides that Great work.
How was you Quarantine?
From Renae
Kia Ora I'm Jorja from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you add a photo of what you did.
Did you think about adding where you got the fire wood from.
Next time, you could explain a little bit more about the fire wood.
Kind Regards Jorja.
Kia Ora I am Olivia From Yaldhurst Model School
ReplyDeletethis blog was a really cool blog it was quite interesting for me to read but next time I think that you should try and ad more writting or a slide show even a google drawing will do fine I just found it a quite small blog collecting the wood looked fun but your blog is great
Why did you go collecting wood?
Kind regards Olivia B
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