Hi my is name Kaylee. I am 10 year old. I go to Kumara school in the west coast and I have two sisters and a brother. I like go read Crystal books, Scary, Animal books too. I have 5 Dogs I have four hunting dogs and one family dog. I also like to draw and play ripper rugby and one more things is to play basketball.
Hello Kayle,
ReplyDeleteI am Albin from YMS.
Wow, that is a very cool introduction. I liked the way that you wrote a introduction in a blog. It is going to helpful to all those who come to your blog. I also liked the picture that you added. It looks very professional.
Anyway an improvement would be you could add more information in a fun and engaging way. Anyway other than that it looks super cool.
Kind regards,
Albin
Hello Kaylee,
ReplyDeleteI'm Grace from Yaldhurst Model School,
I think this is a very cool blog post to for your introduction to your blog.
I like how you added a picture of you and added lots of information..
Maybe next time you can add a DLO like a slide to make it more more eye catching.
Apart from that its great.
- Grace
Hi Kayle! My name is Hana and I'm a year 6 from Yaldhurst Model School!
ReplyDeleteI like how this is short and snappy! It's easy to read, and it doesn't bore you with miles and miles of writing about yourself!
What a coincidence! I'm also 10! And I also like to draw too! It's cool to find someone who you can partially relate to.
Next time, try to think about laying things on the page that draw attention and is interesting and engaging, like Albin said. :D
Overall, great blog post!
- Hana
Thank you I will also try to put more writing and photos
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