Hi Kaylee This is Michaela From Yaldhurst Model school I love baby animals they are so cute and some facts about each animal. I did you know all this stuff from the start? I learned them from you. Maybe you can but some questions in there like this one, What is your favourite baby animals? my favourite baby animal is baby guinea pig. Kind regards Michaela
Hi Kaylee! My name is Hana and I'm a year 6 from Yaldhurst Model School!
Wow Kaylee! One thing for sure is that those animals sure are cute! I also love the way you have added a video! When I was a year 4, I hadn't posted single video on my blog. It was all google slides! -_-
This reminds me of biteable. A site that I use all the time to create cute videos just like this! Biteable is an awesome site, so you should go check it out! The animations are so cute :3
Something that is possible to be added here is an introduction. Perhaps about why you did this, and a little backstory! An introduction can really draw in the reader!
Kia Ora Kaylee my name is olivia form Yaldhurst Model School This looks like a very interesting blog post with the title and how you have the video and you did a great job but next time I think you could write more at the top of the blog that tells us about it and maybe don't put all the letters in capital in the top and give us more detail about the animals in the video. Why is it 2???? Kind regards Oliva
Kia Ora I'm Jorja from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI liked they way you had added a video.
Did you think about adding a link to where you made the video.
Next time, you could add a link to where you made the video.
Kind Regards Jorja.
Hi Kaylee This is Michaela From Yaldhurst Model school
ReplyDeleteI love baby animals they are so cute and some facts about each animal.
I did you know all this stuff from the start?
I learned them from you.
Maybe you can but some questions in there like this one, What is your favourite baby animals?
my favourite baby animal is baby guinea pig.
Kind regards
Michaela
Hi Kaylee! My name is Hana and I'm a year 6 from Yaldhurst Model School!
ReplyDeleteWow Kaylee! One thing for sure is that those animals sure are cute! I also love the way you have added a video! When I was a year 4, I hadn't posted single video on my blog. It was all google slides! -_-
This reminds me of biteable. A site that I use all the time to create cute videos just like this! Biteable is an awesome site, so you should go check it out! The animations are so cute :3
Something that is possible to be added here is an introduction. Perhaps about why you did this, and a little backstory! An introduction can really draw in the reader!
Keep up the amazing work Kaylee!
- Hana (._. )
Kia Ora Kaylee my name is olivia form Yaldhurst Model School
ReplyDeleteThis looks like a very interesting blog post with the title and how you have the video and you did a great job but next time I think you could write more at the top of the blog that tells us about it and maybe don't put all the letters in capital in the top and give us more detail about the animals in the video.
Why is it 2????
Kind regards Oliva
thanks and my favourite is the panda
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